Well, I haven’t gotten any feedback anywhere else so I’m going to post it here. This is the very very very very first part of the my very first chapter of the novel I intend on writing. It’s reached its peak as far as I’m concerned. The only way it can improve now is to get some feedback.
Because I plan on updating it and such, I’m making a page for it if you guys don’t mind. 
Just click on the page that says “alter ego” and you’re off.
